Categories
BACCA Writers

Keeping the bits and pieces

Some authors shun writing groups or writing partners for the very reason they are essential – critical feedback. But isn’t critical feedback from a trusted source better than receiving it from agents or publishers? Or worse, not hearing back from agents or publishers at all and having no idea of what went wrong?

Every beekeeper has experienced opening up their hives and finding their honeybees have built honeycomb in the wrong place. Some beekeepers call this burr comb.

Image provided by Carolyn O’Neal


Beekeepers want even and smooth comb built on the frames we provide for the bees.

Image provided by Carolyn O’Neal

Building comb is hard work for honeybees. It requires tremendous resources and efforts to produce wax. Then they have to festoon together to mold the wax into the hexagon shape of beautiful honeycomb. Honeybees literally work themselves to death building comb and filling it with nectar and pollen.

What do beekeepers do with wax found in the wrong places? Clean, fresh beeswax is valuable! We keep it! We use it to coat honeybee frames for the following spring, or make candles, or polish furniture. There are so many uses for beeswax.

It’s a little like that great paragraph you wrote that just doesn’t fit. Maybe it belongs elsewhere in the story. Maybe it belongs in a different story.

Keep it! Don’t throw away your hard work. Just like building comb for honeybees, writing a good paragraph requires effort and is worth saving.

AI Generated image.
Carolyn O'Neal's avatar

By Carolyn O'Neal

Researching history of earthquake fault under the North Anna Nuclear Power Station in Louisa County and the people most affected by it, including Professor John W. Funkhouser, H. Spurgeon Moss, and June Allen. Please leave message on https://baccaliterary.com/carolyn-oneal/ if you have any information on this topic or these people. Thank you very much.

Leave a comment